Thursday, February 24, 2011

Feedback for Cyn

To those who've read my book, thank you so much for taking the time. It means a lot!

I'm working on a new manuscript and covet your insight and feedback.

My goal wasn't to write a complicated novel, but a simple story to entertain. A fun escape. Did I accomplish that goal?

What did you like? What didn't you like? What sections/components were confusing?

How was the length? Was it difficult to keep track of the characters? What characters did you like best? Least?

What should I keep in mind as I work on the next project?

Add anything you'd like.

It is humbling that you cared enough to read my first attempt at fiction, I know it's not perfect. If you could take the time to help me out I would be very grateful.

You can post your feedback here, private message me on Facebook or email me at: jerry@jrhetrick.com

For those unaware I had a book, and are interested, go to amazon.com and type in jerry hetrick - Cyn is the name of the book and it will be the top link.

A deeply humble, thank you,
Jerry

3 comments:

  1. I'm starting Cyn tomorrow night! I just finished a book... You're next on the Kindle!

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  2. Thank you. I'm looking forward to your insights and feedback.

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  3. Sent you an email... Yes you accomplished that goal!
    Perfect length for weekend reading!

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